As some of you may know, I am doing a major research paper for school about the impact of Toy Story on the animation industry, because of its status as the first CGI film. It's going pretty well but I'm having some trouble, so I thought I would throw this out to all of you for ideas.
My thesis statement (the point I am trying to make with the paper, which the entire paper will back up with evidence) says: "Its [Toy Story]'s success completely changed the face of the animation industry, ushering in the current era of computer-generated animation at the exclusion of traditional hand-drawn fare."
This makes my point as well as anything will and I like it as my thesis, but I do *not* like having the same word in the sentence twice. "Animation" appears once with "industry" and once with "computer-generated." I need to come up with another word to use in one of those spots, and using variations on the word animation (i.e. animated) don't count. My teacher suggested the word "cartoon," but because it is thought of in a derogatory manner by many people, I do not like it too much and would prefer not to use it.
Any suggestions?
Thanks -- cheers!
