The Dis-Trix
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The Dis-Trix
The Dis-Trix - Coming Summer 2004 from Walt Disney Pictures.
In the year 2004, 2D Toons have been held captive by the 3D Toons. Using sophisticated machines the captive 2D Toons are been connected to machines to use their energy and thoughts to keep the 3D Toons alive. The Dis-Trix. In the underground town, Toon Town where the remaining 2D toons live. Their existance? Defeat the 3D toons. "The Dis-Trix" is the world pulled over your eyes. A 3D environment created by machines making you think you have a free choice. In reality, all but a handful of 2D toons has been wiped out. I did not believe it until I saw it with my own eyes - toons are no longer drawn, but spat out by computers in a large warehouse".
(inside the Dis-Trix)
A computer hacker named Neo Mouse is hacking into system when he gets a message from Dorpheous Duck saying "Follow the White Rabbit". he tells him to meet him at Cherry Tree Lane.
That night this mysterious woman runs from this two guys trying to get her for some reason? Anxious she finds a phone. "Plutonion get me out of here!" said the woman. "I'm working on it Trinnie" said Plutonion.
(Trinnie dissapears)
The two mysterious guys look around with discontent! "Where is she?" asked Agent Dum. "She must have found her way out of the Dis-Trix" replied Agent Dee. "We must report this to Agent Eisner" both said.
(they dissapear in the dark)
(Back in the Gummi-Nezzar)
"Trinnie wake up!" said Dorpheous Duck the ship's captain. "Hurry, We have to meet Neo-Mouse!" he said! "Plutoneon hook us back into the Dis-Trix" he commanded.
(Inside the Dis-Trix at the House at Cherry Tree Lane)
Neo-Mouse walks in and finds Dorpheous Duck and Trinnie. "Who are you? Why am I here?" he asked. "Those questions will be answered soon"
he replied. "Neo-Mouse I'm going to show you some things but before I can you need to make a decision, in order for me to help you see this thing you must eat the right side of the mushroom, if you decide to go back to what you know eat the left side of the mushroom. From this decisions you can't turn back! So, choose wisely!" explained Dorpheous Duck.
(Neo-Mouse eats the right side)
Oh no! Dorpheous! Agents are coming! warned Trinnie.
(Neo-Mouse, Dorpheous and Trinnie escape)
(Back in the Gummi-Nezzar)
Neo-Mouse! The Buzz from the Bees is that you're "The One" proclaimed Dorpheous. "The One?" asked Neo-Mouse. "Yes! the prophesy states: The One will bring freedom to the 2D Toons that have been trapped by the 3D Toons and bring the end of the Dis-Trix" explained Dorpheous Duck. "Oh no no no you must have the wrong guy! I couldn't possibly do that!" said Neo-Mouse. "I will show you the way! Follow old Dorpheous he knows the way!" said Dorpheous.
(Dorpheous shows Neo-mouse the real world and the Dis-trix)
(We appear in a restaurant, a piece of steak is on a plate, and someone is cutting it up. We see Agent Eisner sitting across from this person, and he
takes his sunglasses off.)
So we have a deal, _Mr_Pete? said Agent Eisner
We now see the person sitting with him is Pete. He looks at his cut up bit of steak on his fork.
"You know, I know this steak doesn't exist. I know that when
I put it in my mouth, the Dis-trix is telling my brain..that
it is juicy..and delicious." Said Pete
(he sighs)
"After nine years, you know what I realize? Ignorance is bliss." said Pete
(Pete puts the bit of steak into his mouth, and sighs, as he chews it with
his eyes closed.)
"Then we have a deal?" asked Agent Eisner
"I don't want to remember _nothing_. Nothing. You understand?
And I wanna be rich..you know, someone important. Like an famous Actor. "Replied Pete
"Whatever you want..._Mr_ Pete..."said Agent Eisner
"Okay. I get my body back into a power plant, re-insert me
into the Dis-trix, I'll get you what you want." Said Pete
"Access codes to the Toon Town mainframe.." Asked Agent Eisner
"No, I told you, I don't know them. I can get you the man
who does." replied Pete
"Dorpheus Duck?" Said Agent Eisner
(Back in the Gummi-Nezzar)
Dorpheus walks in.
"Plutoneon, when you're done, bring the ship up to broadcast
depth, we're going in. I'm taking Neo-mouse to see her." said Dorpheous
"See who?" asked Neo-mouse
"The Oracle...." replied Tantor
(Everyone gets into their chairs, and gets plugged in, as Tantor sets everything up for them.)
(They arrive at the door to the Oracle's appartment. Neo waits for Dorpheus to open the door. Dorpheus shakes his head.)
"I told you, I can only show you the door. _You're_ the one who has to walk through it." Said Dorpheous
(Neo puts his hand on the door handle, just about to open it, when a Priestess opens a slot on the door)
"What's the pass code?" asked the Priestess
"Walt Disney sent me" replied Dorpheous
"Hello, Neo-mouse. You're right on time..." said the Priestess
(She leads him and Dorpheus inside.)
"Make yourself at home, Dorpheus." said the Priestess
(Morpheus stays by the door.)
"These are the other potentials...you can wait here." said the Priestess
(Neo looks around the room, and sees he is the only Technicolor Toon there. Most of the B&W 2D Toons have all been forgotten. Here they play and Meditate.)
"The Oracle will see you now." Said the Priestess
(He walks into the nearby room, a kitchen. He sits down. he's alone in the Kitchen as he wait for the Oracle. He hears someone coming. All of the sudden this Melody start playing)
"You had plenty Money" said the voice (a flash of leg comes from behing this curtain that separates the kitchen from another room) "In 1922" sang the voice. (Suddenly this red headed woman comes out of the curtain wearing a red dress, Neo-Mouse's jaw falls open) "You let other woman - Make a Fool of You - Why don't you do right" (the woman started walking toward neo-mouse in a sexy way) "Like some other man" (as she starts sliding down the refrigerator on her back) "Do....- Get out of here - get me some money, too" (Neo-Mouse could not believe what he was seen! she start walking towards him again. Neo-Mouse started sweating) "Now if you had prepared - Twenty years ago - You wouldn't be a-wanderin' now - from door to door - Why don't you do right" (she started moving her hips as she was almost close to him) "Like some other men - do...... - get out of here - get me some money, too" (Neo-Mouse had the Oracle sitting on his lap, touching his jacket as he got all nervous) "get out of here - get me some money, too" (she took neo-mouse's glasses off, as she stood up, went behind him and sat on the table) "Why don't you do right?" (she stood up, did some turns and ended up laying on the table) "Like Some other Men..... "(she grabed Neo-mouse tie and pulled him close to her lips)"Do-o-o-o-o....." ( as she ealked to the other side of the table and sat down)
Hello Neo-Mouse, want to play patty cake? asked the Oracle.
(Neo-Mouse couldnt say a word out of shock)
"You've got the wrong idea about me Mr. Mouse" said the Oracle
"You don't know how hard it is being a woman.......Looking the way I do." said the oracle as she walked towards the window
(Neo-Mouse couldnt move or say anything)
"I'm not bad Neo-mouse. I'm just designed that way, Find thy selve neo, Dorpheous believes in you" said the Oracle as she left the room.
(Neo-Mouse walks out the door and meets Morpheus. He puts his hand on Neo's shoulder and smiles at him.)
"What was said and done was for you, and you alone." said Dorpheous Duck.
(In the hotel, they are on their way up the stairs. Neo looks at a cat as it walks past the doorway. He turns around again, and an identical looking cat. Deja vu! Looks like the bad guys have cut the hard line making it impossible for the crew to get back to the gummi-nezzar! Meanwhile, Dorpheus goes to the window, and also finds that there's a brick wall there.)
(Agent Eisner pauses, as he is about to make his way up the stairs with the other agents. He touches his earpiece.)
"Eighth floor." said Agent Eisner
"They're on the eighth floor..." shouted Agent Dee
(Dorpheus and the others continue on their way. Until Agent Eisner grabs Dorpheous. They're about to start a fight until Dorpheous duck starts sweating and get nervous and just gives up. Agent Eisner takes him captive)
(Back in the Gummi-Nezzar, Plutonion gets Pete out of the Dis-Trix to his bad luck Pete smacks him unconcious.)
"He lied to us, Trinnie. He tricked us." said Pete
"That's not true Pete, he set us free." said Trinnie
"I disagree, Trinnie. I think that the Dis-trix can be more real than this world. All I do is pull the plug here. You have to watch Tantor die. " claimed Pete
(his hand reaches towards Tantor's plug. Pete pulls the plug, and Tantor collapses and dies. Unknown to Pete, Plutonion is not dead, and gets up and finds an ACME riffle. Plutoneon comes up behind him and shoots him. The phone starts to ring again. Both jump.)
"You first.." said Neo-Mouse to Trinnie
(Trinnie picks up the phone, and wakes up on the Gummi-nezzar.)
(Dorpheus is in the office on the top floor of Loco, with 3 agents. He is handcuffed to the chair he's sitting on, and is pumped full of serum, alternately shivering and sweating. He is hooked up to various monitors with white disk electrodes.)
(Meanwhile, Trinnie and Neo-Mouse are up on the rooftop, attacking the various soldiers and guards placed there. They have Guns and knives, like extensions of their bodies used with the same deadly precision as their feet and their fists. Across the roof, the pilot inside the army helicopter watches the ferocious onslaught. The Pilot's whole body dissolves, consumed by a swarm of static as Agent Dum takes over his body.Soon Neo-mouse finds himself fighting with Agent Dum. Trinnie shoots him and he dies. Over the rushing water, and the alarms, Mr. Eisner (still in the office) hears a sound, and suddenly realises the seriousness of the attack. He turns to the wall of windows, as the helicopter comes into view. Neo-Mouse is in the back bay, aiming the mounted .50 machine gun, straight at him. Neo-mouse fires, and bullets explode through the windows in a cacophony of crashing glass, as the Agents reach for their weapons. But Neo-mouse is too close, the machine gun too fast, and bullets are everywhere, perforating the room. Mr. Eisner is hit first, his body falling back. Then Agent Dum, his gun still firing as his body falls. And finally Agent Dee. Neo stares at Dorpheus, as if trying to will him into action. With tremendous effort, Dorpheus regains control and yells out as he strains the handcuffs, and finally snaps them in two. He pulls the wires from his head, and stands up. He looks towards Neo-mouse, and starts to move towards the window. The Agents take over the bodies of the guards outside, and knife their way back into the room. They fire, as Dorpheus reaches the window, hitting his leg as he jumps for it out of the window. Neo-mouse jumps from the helicopter, grabbing onto Dorpheus just before he falls, and holds onto him as they fall until the rope ends and goes taught. Neo-mouse keeps a hold of Dorpheus' arm. Trinnie is already pulling the helicopter up and away from Loco. But Agent Eisner grabs the gun from the nearest soldier, and targets the helicopter, hitting the fuel tank. The rear hull is punched full of holes. Neo is pulling Morpheus up to him, when he hears the engine begin to die. Trinity guides the helicopter towards the roof of the nearest building, as Morpheus drops, landing safely on the roof. Neo soon follows, rolling free as the rope goes slack. Neo is about to detach himself, when he realises Trinity is still in helicopter. As the helicopter begins to fall, Neo swings the rope, as it begins to pull him fast along the roof. Trinnie gets out her ACME gun and snaps the rope inside the helicopter, grabbing onto it as she swings out of the helicopter, held up by Neo-mouse, who is standing at the very edge of the building, almost falling off. He swings her out of the way of the helicopter, as it crashes into the glass windows of the opposite building, creating a huge ripple as all the glass blows out of the windows, and Trinnie just misses it, as the helicopter explodes into flames, and she bangs into a lower window of the building Neo-mouse is on. Dorpheous calls Plutoneon and gets the location of their Exit, 42 Wallaby Way. They arrive at the booth just as the phone starts to ring. Dorpheus goes into the phone booth, and picks up the phone. An old homeless man, lying on a bench nearby watches, as Dorpheus appears to visibly disintegrate in front of them, and the phone drops, dangling by it's cord. Trinnie is about to answer the phone, when she suddenly stops and turns to Neo-mouse.)
"Everything the Oracle has told me has come true. Everything but this." said Trinnie.
(She changes her mind, and walks into the phone booth. She picks up, just as the old man changes into Agent Eisner and aims a gun at the phone box. She puts her hand up, as she did in the beginning to stop the truck, and is pulled back into the real world, just as Agent Eisner shoots the phone. Neo-mouse stares at the exit to the subway station, as Agent Eisner approaches him, smirking. Neo-Mouse and Agent Eisner are standing at opposite ends of the station. Neo-mouse takes a deep breath, focusing. He clenches his hands into fists, and relaxes them, pushing his fingers outwards. Suddenly they both lunge for their guns, firing, as they run up the walls, and meet in the middle of the room, suspended in mid air, as bullets fly all around them. They fall to the ground, guns at each other's heads. Agent Eisner smiles. Neo-Mouse pushes Agent Eisner onto the train tracks just as a train comes by and hits him. sentinels are about to attack the Gummi-nezzar. Neo-Mouse is running down the road, away from Agent Eisner, who came back out the subway train straight after it flattened him. As he runs, he notices a man talking on a cell phone. As he runs by the man, he grabs the phone. He calls Plutoneon who gives him directions to get directed to the right direction Room 303! The sentinels have arrived at the Gummi-nezzar. The sentinels are drilling through the hull of the Gummi-nezzar. The computer warns the crew of the hull breech.)
The sentinels have broken through and are now on the main deck, ripping everything apart. Trinity is still sitting by Neo.
"Neo..I'm not afraid anymore! The Oracle told me I would
fall in love, and that man, the man that I loved, would be
The One. So, you see, you can't be dead...you can't be...
because I love you....you hear me? I _love_ you... " Trinnie leans over and kisses him
(As she says this, the blow echoes deep in Neo's mind. In the Dis-trix, his eyes snap open. Trinnie screams as his life monitors jump back to life. Plutoneon and Dorpheus stare, in disbelief. As Agent Eisner fires, Neo-mouse just puts his hand out. The bullets slow down and stop in front of him. Neo-mouse looks at them, and picks one up. He looks at it, and then drops it to the floor. He looks at the rest, and moves his head down. They all fall to the ground. The Agents stare, and all take a step back.
Neo-mouse looks at Agent Eisner, and runs towards him. Like the agents do, he appears to go inside Agent Eisner's body, eventually bursting through his skin, as pieces of the agent that look something like green glass fly all over the room. As we watch Neo-mouse, he looks down at the ground with his eyes shut. The room appears to bend. Neo's eyes snap open and he looks up at the two remaining agents. They look at each other, and run for it. For a moment, we see the room as it is through Neo's eyes now, 3D Dis-trix code. The sentinels are slowly destroying the whole ship, as one looms near Trinity, who ducks to cover Neo.
In the Dis-trix, Neo-mouse lunges for the phone, just as Dorpheus uses the EMP to destroy the sentinels. Neo-mouse's eyes open, and he smiles at Trinnie as he kisses her. Matrix code appears as Neo-mouse begins to speak. A box which says system failure appears on the screen. We travel down a phone line, as we see that Neo-mouse is in a phone box.
"Where we go from there...is a choice I leave to you... " says Neo-Mouse
Neo hangs up the phone, as he steps out of the phone booth, and puts on his sunglasses.
He looks around the street for a moment, and then flies off. Three kids see him fly off.
"He can fly!, He can fly!" said the first two
"He Flew!" said the third one.
Written by: MMBoy and Loomis
Characters by: MMBoy and Loomis
In the year 2004, 2D Toons have been held captive by the 3D Toons. Using sophisticated machines the captive 2D Toons are been connected to machines to use their energy and thoughts to keep the 3D Toons alive. The Dis-Trix. In the underground town, Toon Town where the remaining 2D toons live. Their existance? Defeat the 3D toons. "The Dis-Trix" is the world pulled over your eyes. A 3D environment created by machines making you think you have a free choice. In reality, all but a handful of 2D toons has been wiped out. I did not believe it until I saw it with my own eyes - toons are no longer drawn, but spat out by computers in a large warehouse".
(inside the Dis-Trix)
A computer hacker named Neo Mouse is hacking into system when he gets a message from Dorpheous Duck saying "Follow the White Rabbit". he tells him to meet him at Cherry Tree Lane.
That night this mysterious woman runs from this two guys trying to get her for some reason? Anxious she finds a phone. "Plutonion get me out of here!" said the woman. "I'm working on it Trinnie" said Plutonion.
(Trinnie dissapears)
The two mysterious guys look around with discontent! "Where is she?" asked Agent Dum. "She must have found her way out of the Dis-Trix" replied Agent Dee. "We must report this to Agent Eisner" both said.
(they dissapear in the dark)
(Back in the Gummi-Nezzar)
"Trinnie wake up!" said Dorpheous Duck the ship's captain. "Hurry, We have to meet Neo-Mouse!" he said! "Plutoneon hook us back into the Dis-Trix" he commanded.
(Inside the Dis-Trix at the House at Cherry Tree Lane)
Neo-Mouse walks in and finds Dorpheous Duck and Trinnie. "Who are you? Why am I here?" he asked. "Those questions will be answered soon"
he replied. "Neo-Mouse I'm going to show you some things but before I can you need to make a decision, in order for me to help you see this thing you must eat the right side of the mushroom, if you decide to go back to what you know eat the left side of the mushroom. From this decisions you can't turn back! So, choose wisely!" explained Dorpheous Duck.
(Neo-Mouse eats the right side)
Oh no! Dorpheous! Agents are coming! warned Trinnie.
(Neo-Mouse, Dorpheous and Trinnie escape)
(Back in the Gummi-Nezzar)
Neo-Mouse! The Buzz from the Bees is that you're "The One" proclaimed Dorpheous. "The One?" asked Neo-Mouse. "Yes! the prophesy states: The One will bring freedom to the 2D Toons that have been trapped by the 3D Toons and bring the end of the Dis-Trix" explained Dorpheous Duck. "Oh no no no you must have the wrong guy! I couldn't possibly do that!" said Neo-Mouse. "I will show you the way! Follow old Dorpheous he knows the way!" said Dorpheous.
(Dorpheous shows Neo-mouse the real world and the Dis-trix)
(We appear in a restaurant, a piece of steak is on a plate, and someone is cutting it up. We see Agent Eisner sitting across from this person, and he
takes his sunglasses off.)
So we have a deal, _Mr_Pete? said Agent Eisner
We now see the person sitting with him is Pete. He looks at his cut up bit of steak on his fork.
"You know, I know this steak doesn't exist. I know that when
I put it in my mouth, the Dis-trix is telling my brain..that
it is juicy..and delicious." Said Pete
(he sighs)
"After nine years, you know what I realize? Ignorance is bliss." said Pete
(Pete puts the bit of steak into his mouth, and sighs, as he chews it with
his eyes closed.)
"Then we have a deal?" asked Agent Eisner
"I don't want to remember _nothing_. Nothing. You understand?
And I wanna be rich..you know, someone important. Like an famous Actor. "Replied Pete
"Whatever you want..._Mr_ Pete..."said Agent Eisner
"Okay. I get my body back into a power plant, re-insert me
into the Dis-trix, I'll get you what you want." Said Pete
"Access codes to the Toon Town mainframe.." Asked Agent Eisner
"No, I told you, I don't know them. I can get you the man
who does." replied Pete
"Dorpheus Duck?" Said Agent Eisner
(Back in the Gummi-Nezzar)
Dorpheus walks in.
"Plutoneon, when you're done, bring the ship up to broadcast
depth, we're going in. I'm taking Neo-mouse to see her." said Dorpheous
"See who?" asked Neo-mouse
"The Oracle...." replied Tantor
(Everyone gets into their chairs, and gets plugged in, as Tantor sets everything up for them.)
(They arrive at the door to the Oracle's appartment. Neo waits for Dorpheus to open the door. Dorpheus shakes his head.)
"I told you, I can only show you the door. _You're_ the one who has to walk through it." Said Dorpheous
(Neo puts his hand on the door handle, just about to open it, when a Priestess opens a slot on the door)
"What's the pass code?" asked the Priestess
"Walt Disney sent me" replied Dorpheous
"Hello, Neo-mouse. You're right on time..." said the Priestess
(She leads him and Dorpheus inside.)
"Make yourself at home, Dorpheus." said the Priestess
(Morpheus stays by the door.)
"These are the other potentials...you can wait here." said the Priestess
(Neo looks around the room, and sees he is the only Technicolor Toon there. Most of the B&W 2D Toons have all been forgotten. Here they play and Meditate.)
"The Oracle will see you now." Said the Priestess
(He walks into the nearby room, a kitchen. He sits down. he's alone in the Kitchen as he wait for the Oracle. He hears someone coming. All of the sudden this Melody start playing)
"You had plenty Money" said the voice (a flash of leg comes from behing this curtain that separates the kitchen from another room) "In 1922" sang the voice. (Suddenly this red headed woman comes out of the curtain wearing a red dress, Neo-Mouse's jaw falls open) "You let other woman - Make a Fool of You - Why don't you do right" (the woman started walking toward neo-mouse in a sexy way) "Like some other man" (as she starts sliding down the refrigerator on her back) "Do....- Get out of here - get me some money, too" (Neo-Mouse could not believe what he was seen! she start walking towards him again. Neo-Mouse started sweating) "Now if you had prepared - Twenty years ago - You wouldn't be a-wanderin' now - from door to door - Why don't you do right" (she started moving her hips as she was almost close to him) "Like some other men - do...... - get out of here - get me some money, too" (Neo-Mouse had the Oracle sitting on his lap, touching his jacket as he got all nervous) "get out of here - get me some money, too" (she took neo-mouse's glasses off, as she stood up, went behind him and sat on the table) "Why don't you do right?" (she stood up, did some turns and ended up laying on the table) "Like Some other Men..... "(she grabed Neo-mouse tie and pulled him close to her lips)"Do-o-o-o-o....." ( as she ealked to the other side of the table and sat down)
Hello Neo-Mouse, want to play patty cake? asked the Oracle.
(Neo-Mouse couldnt say a word out of shock)
"You've got the wrong idea about me Mr. Mouse" said the Oracle
"You don't know how hard it is being a woman.......Looking the way I do." said the oracle as she walked towards the window
(Neo-Mouse couldnt move or say anything)
"I'm not bad Neo-mouse. I'm just designed that way, Find thy selve neo, Dorpheous believes in you" said the Oracle as she left the room.
(Neo-Mouse walks out the door and meets Morpheus. He puts his hand on Neo's shoulder and smiles at him.)
"What was said and done was for you, and you alone." said Dorpheous Duck.
(In the hotel, they are on their way up the stairs. Neo looks at a cat as it walks past the doorway. He turns around again, and an identical looking cat. Deja vu! Looks like the bad guys have cut the hard line making it impossible for the crew to get back to the gummi-nezzar! Meanwhile, Dorpheus goes to the window, and also finds that there's a brick wall there.)
(Agent Eisner pauses, as he is about to make his way up the stairs with the other agents. He touches his earpiece.)
"Eighth floor." said Agent Eisner
"They're on the eighth floor..." shouted Agent Dee
(Dorpheus and the others continue on their way. Until Agent Eisner grabs Dorpheous. They're about to start a fight until Dorpheous duck starts sweating and get nervous and just gives up. Agent Eisner takes him captive)
(Back in the Gummi-Nezzar, Plutonion gets Pete out of the Dis-Trix to his bad luck Pete smacks him unconcious.)
"He lied to us, Trinnie. He tricked us." said Pete
"That's not true Pete, he set us free." said Trinnie
"I disagree, Trinnie. I think that the Dis-trix can be more real than this world. All I do is pull the plug here. You have to watch Tantor die. " claimed Pete
(his hand reaches towards Tantor's plug. Pete pulls the plug, and Tantor collapses and dies. Unknown to Pete, Plutonion is not dead, and gets up and finds an ACME riffle. Plutoneon comes up behind him and shoots him. The phone starts to ring again. Both jump.)
"You first.." said Neo-Mouse to Trinnie
(Trinnie picks up the phone, and wakes up on the Gummi-nezzar.)
(Dorpheus is in the office on the top floor of Loco, with 3 agents. He is handcuffed to the chair he's sitting on, and is pumped full of serum, alternately shivering and sweating. He is hooked up to various monitors with white disk electrodes.)
(Meanwhile, Trinnie and Neo-Mouse are up on the rooftop, attacking the various soldiers and guards placed there. They have Guns and knives, like extensions of their bodies used with the same deadly precision as their feet and their fists. Across the roof, the pilot inside the army helicopter watches the ferocious onslaught. The Pilot's whole body dissolves, consumed by a swarm of static as Agent Dum takes over his body.Soon Neo-mouse finds himself fighting with Agent Dum. Trinnie shoots him and he dies. Over the rushing water, and the alarms, Mr. Eisner (still in the office) hears a sound, and suddenly realises the seriousness of the attack. He turns to the wall of windows, as the helicopter comes into view. Neo-Mouse is in the back bay, aiming the mounted .50 machine gun, straight at him. Neo-mouse fires, and bullets explode through the windows in a cacophony of crashing glass, as the Agents reach for their weapons. But Neo-mouse is too close, the machine gun too fast, and bullets are everywhere, perforating the room. Mr. Eisner is hit first, his body falling back. Then Agent Dum, his gun still firing as his body falls. And finally Agent Dee. Neo stares at Dorpheus, as if trying to will him into action. With tremendous effort, Dorpheus regains control and yells out as he strains the handcuffs, and finally snaps them in two. He pulls the wires from his head, and stands up. He looks towards Neo-mouse, and starts to move towards the window. The Agents take over the bodies of the guards outside, and knife their way back into the room. They fire, as Dorpheus reaches the window, hitting his leg as he jumps for it out of the window. Neo-mouse jumps from the helicopter, grabbing onto Dorpheus just before he falls, and holds onto him as they fall until the rope ends and goes taught. Neo-mouse keeps a hold of Dorpheus' arm. Trinnie is already pulling the helicopter up and away from Loco. But Agent Eisner grabs the gun from the nearest soldier, and targets the helicopter, hitting the fuel tank. The rear hull is punched full of holes. Neo is pulling Morpheus up to him, when he hears the engine begin to die. Trinity guides the helicopter towards the roof of the nearest building, as Morpheus drops, landing safely on the roof. Neo soon follows, rolling free as the rope goes slack. Neo is about to detach himself, when he realises Trinity is still in helicopter. As the helicopter begins to fall, Neo swings the rope, as it begins to pull him fast along the roof. Trinnie gets out her ACME gun and snaps the rope inside the helicopter, grabbing onto it as she swings out of the helicopter, held up by Neo-mouse, who is standing at the very edge of the building, almost falling off. He swings her out of the way of the helicopter, as it crashes into the glass windows of the opposite building, creating a huge ripple as all the glass blows out of the windows, and Trinnie just misses it, as the helicopter explodes into flames, and she bangs into a lower window of the building Neo-mouse is on. Dorpheous calls Plutoneon and gets the location of their Exit, 42 Wallaby Way. They arrive at the booth just as the phone starts to ring. Dorpheus goes into the phone booth, and picks up the phone. An old homeless man, lying on a bench nearby watches, as Dorpheus appears to visibly disintegrate in front of them, and the phone drops, dangling by it's cord. Trinnie is about to answer the phone, when she suddenly stops and turns to Neo-mouse.)
"Everything the Oracle has told me has come true. Everything but this." said Trinnie.
(She changes her mind, and walks into the phone booth. She picks up, just as the old man changes into Agent Eisner and aims a gun at the phone box. She puts her hand up, as she did in the beginning to stop the truck, and is pulled back into the real world, just as Agent Eisner shoots the phone. Neo-mouse stares at the exit to the subway station, as Agent Eisner approaches him, smirking. Neo-Mouse and Agent Eisner are standing at opposite ends of the station. Neo-mouse takes a deep breath, focusing. He clenches his hands into fists, and relaxes them, pushing his fingers outwards. Suddenly they both lunge for their guns, firing, as they run up the walls, and meet in the middle of the room, suspended in mid air, as bullets fly all around them. They fall to the ground, guns at each other's heads. Agent Eisner smiles. Neo-Mouse pushes Agent Eisner onto the train tracks just as a train comes by and hits him. sentinels are about to attack the Gummi-nezzar. Neo-Mouse is running down the road, away from Agent Eisner, who came back out the subway train straight after it flattened him. As he runs, he notices a man talking on a cell phone. As he runs by the man, he grabs the phone. He calls Plutoneon who gives him directions to get directed to the right direction Room 303! The sentinels have arrived at the Gummi-nezzar. The sentinels are drilling through the hull of the Gummi-nezzar. The computer warns the crew of the hull breech.)
The sentinels have broken through and are now on the main deck, ripping everything apart. Trinity is still sitting by Neo.
"Neo..I'm not afraid anymore! The Oracle told me I would
fall in love, and that man, the man that I loved, would be
The One. So, you see, you can't be dead...you can't be...
because I love you....you hear me? I _love_ you... " Trinnie leans over and kisses him
(As she says this, the blow echoes deep in Neo's mind. In the Dis-trix, his eyes snap open. Trinnie screams as his life monitors jump back to life. Plutoneon and Dorpheus stare, in disbelief. As Agent Eisner fires, Neo-mouse just puts his hand out. The bullets slow down and stop in front of him. Neo-mouse looks at them, and picks one up. He looks at it, and then drops it to the floor. He looks at the rest, and moves his head down. They all fall to the ground. The Agents stare, and all take a step back.
Neo-mouse looks at Agent Eisner, and runs towards him. Like the agents do, he appears to go inside Agent Eisner's body, eventually bursting through his skin, as pieces of the agent that look something like green glass fly all over the room. As we watch Neo-mouse, he looks down at the ground with his eyes shut. The room appears to bend. Neo's eyes snap open and he looks up at the two remaining agents. They look at each other, and run for it. For a moment, we see the room as it is through Neo's eyes now, 3D Dis-trix code. The sentinels are slowly destroying the whole ship, as one looms near Trinity, who ducks to cover Neo.
In the Dis-trix, Neo-mouse lunges for the phone, just as Dorpheus uses the EMP to destroy the sentinels. Neo-mouse's eyes open, and he smiles at Trinnie as he kisses her. Matrix code appears as Neo-mouse begins to speak. A box which says system failure appears on the screen. We travel down a phone line, as we see that Neo-mouse is in a phone box.
"Where we go from there...is a choice I leave to you... " says Neo-Mouse
Neo hangs up the phone, as he steps out of the phone booth, and puts on his sunglasses.
He looks around the street for a moment, and then flies off. Three kids see him fly off.
"He can fly!, He can fly!" said the first two
"He Flew!" said the third one.
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MickeyMouseboy wrote: "I will show you the way! Follow old Dorpheous he knows the way!"
That was pure genius. Are there going to be cheap- . . . excuse me, I mean sequels?
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Fantasic!Hello Neo-Mouse, want to play patty cake? asked the Oracle.
(Neo-Mouse couldnt say a word out of shock)
"You've got the wrong idea about me Mr. Mouse" said the Oracle
"You don't know how hard it is being a woman.......Looking the way I do." said the oracle as she walked towards the window
Netty's just going to love Pete's inclusion.
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Hey, thanks for giving me co-credit, MMB.MMB wrote:Written by: MMBoy and Loomis
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Very cool stuff. I particularly like how Pete was the betrayer...
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When are these little beauties coming out . I can't wait they sounds like really good things especially the fact of 3D wa-hoo. Been waiting for this for long enough!!
When are these little beauties coming out . I can't wait they sounds like really good things especially the fact of 3D wa-hoo. Been waiting for this for long enough!!
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They're not real . . . it was just MMB making a joke. But, I agree, I would definately watch the movies, if only to see Donald in black spandex and sunglasses . . .Disney Guru wrote:Hey Neato Awesome
When are these little beauties coming out . I can't wait they sounds like really good things especially the fact of 3D wa-hoo. Been waiting for this for long enough!!
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Of Wonderland fame, by any chance?MickeyMouseboy & Loomis wrote: a message from Dorpheous Duck saying "Follow the White Rabbit".
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Well, I'm sure your sequels will be better then the movie sequels!MickeyMouseboy wrote:Hehe I'm glad you liked the story, gives me encouragement to write the sequel hehe
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Yes, I read it and liked it. I'm not the world's biggest Matrix fan though. I prefer Dark City.
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Well, I was going to suggest that the Dis-Trix sequels should be "crap", to keep in line with their inspiration2099net wrote:Well, I'm sure your sequels will be better then the movie sequels!MickeyMouseboy wrote:Hehe I'm glad you liked the story, gives me encouragement to write the sequel hehe
(at the movie sequels )
And in the third one, completely forget about Neo-Mouse until the end of the movie when somebody remembers "Oh yeah, he's the one isn't he....".
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I meant that the Matrix sequels weren't very good, and the Dis-trix should keep close to the inspiration.MickeyMouseboy wrote:what do you mean Loomis?
Also, I had a huge problem with Matrix: Revolutions. Neo is meant to be The One. Yet for half the movie he just disappears, and there is a huge pointless and inexplicable battle sequence, then somebody remembers: "I wonder what Neo is doing? You know, that guy that we are resting the entire fate of humanity on?". Then he gets all Christ-like. and the movie
goes to Circular Quay.
So in short, you should do the same with Neo-Mouse: forget him for 85% of the third script
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