Hey all. I've been busy recently with a ton of school work, and especailly working on a webpage for my history class... I was just wondering if you all would care just to look at the main page and maybe check out a link or two and tell me how you think the page's look. If you do and respond with anything good/bad, I'd be much obloged! thanks~
http://www.scuba-tuba.com/history/history2.html
Can you all give me your opinion please?
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Jabroni--
Nice start...now for my suggestions.
Maps
You have room for either a couple more maps (resources, population density, etc.) OR you should make those three maps a bit bigger. Seems like a lot of wasted space.
The Nile
I like this section, but why is the text bolded? I would save that for important information, or things you want to stand out. Usually you will lose readers if all the text is bold.
Climate
Good info here, but the mummy picture is completely out-of-place. I understand why you have it there but it has absolutely nothing to do with the Climate of Egypt. A suggestion would be to have a picture from the Nile Delta AND the valley of Upper Egypt, since they seem to differ greatly. A gratuitous desert pic may be in order, too.
General Information
Lost of good info, but again I would decrease the bold.
Ex:
Capital: Cairo
Location: Northern Africa
Hope these comments help.
Nice start...now for my suggestions.
Maps
You have room for either a couple more maps (resources, population density, etc.) OR you should make those three maps a bit bigger. Seems like a lot of wasted space.
The Nile
I like this section, but why is the text bolded? I would save that for important information, or things you want to stand out. Usually you will lose readers if all the text is bold.
Climate
Good info here, but the mummy picture is completely out-of-place. I understand why you have it there but it has absolutely nothing to do with the Climate of Egypt. A suggestion would be to have a picture from the Nile Delta AND the valley of Upper Egypt, since they seem to differ greatly. A gratuitous desert pic may be in order, too.
General Information
Lost of good info, but again I would decrease the bold.
Ex:
Capital: Cairo
Location: Northern Africa
Hope these comments help.
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