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How bad is it?

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Okay, I had to write a personal narritive for language arts class, and chose a moment when I met pinocchio. The story took place this past summer. Anyways, I was wondering how bad you all think my story is...

any critisisim, thoughts, or opinions would be much obloged for! thanks!

http://www.scuba-tuba.com/pino.html
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It's good, but you spelled "eager" wrong. ;)

I take it you had your domain issues all resolved?
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Post by jabroni76 »

yes luke, to both. My friend noted eager, and I fixed my domain problem... now to put something on there!
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